7-1-11

I know I just posted one the other day... wait, was that just yesterday? Wow, how time flies. Well, I suppose technically it would be two days ago, but that's just because its a little after midnight.

Anyway, this one was written just a little while earlier than the previous one. I rather like this one. It starts out with sort of a dark tone (and personally, I really like that dark, mysterious undertone. I like somber things sometimes.) and edges its way towards hope.

Anyway, maybe I should just let you read it now.

And once again

I fall to my knees;

My heart falls out of my chest.

A million shards surround me.

I try to gather the pieces;

The ground is stained from my fingertips,

My fingertips washed from my tears.

My pain consumes me

Until I am just a shell,

A shadow of what I once was.

As I surveyed the debris, I felt the breeze of your love

Caressing my face,

Healing my broken heart.

I feel your breath run through me,

Renewing my soul,

Until I am only Yours.

One thing I really never do is revise my writing, especially creative stuff like this. I mean, sure, sometimes I'll go through and write a second version, but I would never dare to just change something. I mean, obviously I had a reason for stating it in a specific way at the time, so why change what I felt was right, ya know?